This would surround the students with positive energy and will definitely help them to overcome their bullying attitude. Rich or poor, high class or low class every child is same and equal and their innocence must not be harmed by substandard and unsatisfactory attitude. Lastly , I want to say that each of us is a book to be written, either good or bad , worst or best and, if written, defines a person’s personality ., a person’s persona is by the people, the nature, the positive or the negative energy surrounding him. Good the surroundings are, best a person is.
`Though the essay is written very well, could it be improved further??I mean in the starting some pages, the content was lacking coherence and it was later only that all his words started moving in the same direction..Also, does writing causes or consequences in a sequence help??I mean could we be like writing causes from childhood(less focus on female education, pressuring here towards household chores) to middle ages(child marriage, high dropout around this time) to later ages(when women are discriminated in jobs)??Please help, and do point out if you felt my point was unwarranted
The sphere of knowledge that interests me most at the moment and the possible direction of my research is coding theory in electronic communications, and I’ve heard that the New Hampshire University has a very promising research on this topic going on at the time being. I am sure that there is no better place to continue education in the field I have chosen, and that tutelage I may get here is second to none. I also believe that it is the best place for me to find use of my abilities and make a contribution to the sphere of science I have chosen.