Here is another example of a simple error of omission that could have been caught if the student had read the essay aloud or given it to a friend to read. The word "of" should be between "calculation" and "the." That one small error makes the entire sentence awkward and confusing. If the instructor has to reread the sentence to try to understand its meaning, the flow of the essay is interrupted. If this happens often enough in the essay, it gives an overall bad impression on what otherwise might be a very good paper in terms of research.
Our new packaging for our pets mince. It is the red offal (organs) of our cattle. The hearts have gone to Giles at La Tete and the livers into either liver spread (see below) or dried liver strips which we sell to two pet shops. Hillside Vet in Cape Town and About Cats and Dogs in Stellenbosch. Hence our pets mince is spleen, gullet, lungs, part of the tongue and kidneys. Pets mince should be available at all our retail clients. It is frozen. As with all our packaging it is done by the great team at Geiger Klotzbucher in Cape Town, ask for Francois or Christiaan.